your pretty good (: I like it alot (:

Really Good...

Woah Thats Better Than What I've Ever Wrote..(: Very Talented At Coming Up With Things Like That.(:

I think it's a great first poem. I liked the way you started and ended each stanza with the same line. And I could feel the author's (you I guess) frustration that the other person won't respond to her needs. Good job Bryn!

Like it a lot :)))

Beautiful! I love it! I wish I could write poetry.

I like it:) I write poetry as well, only it's free form, so it doesn't rhyme, but very good job!

i like it : )

good :) keep it up !!

i really love it. the feeling it gives away as well. i thought i'd give a bit of criticism too, do you mind?
as pretty as it sounds when you end and begin each stanza with the same line, it might seem like you're trying too hard to keep it up.
if you feel like it has an ending, you shouldn't add anything and personally, i think it's gorgeous the way it is.
also, it doesn't always have to rhyme, so don't push that either. it's good that you've got it all covered, the basic parts of what a poem is, and again, i like it.
keep it up
xo rony

I like it........ a lot haha

Thanks! :)