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xhoneybeex asked:

19 Jul 2011

Hello my fellow BG writers! I need some help with a scene...

I'm writing a story right now and I'm working on a scene where some "popular kids" are picking on a girl from school (its from her point of view). I need them to be verbally cruel to her and say hurtful things to the point where she's crying...this seems harsh but its part of developing the character and the plot line which i'm sure most of you understand. I'm just having trouble writing the things they're going to say to her. Can anyone help me out? I know simple things like "your weird" "your ugly" but i need them to be more complex insults that really impact the character emotionally. Thanks!

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livelikeyourdying

livelikeyourdying says:

Posted on 20 Jul 2011

go to helll, life will be better here.
you slut which guy are you with NAmes ( jj cj bj lucas.etc)
i heard you got a make over. i dont think it worked.
i heard you gave lucas a bj and got herpes .
random little stuff builds up

rubycity13

rubycity13 says:

Posted on 30 Jul 2011

Why don't you dig your own grave *(girls name)*, you'll be dead soon.
You must of been born on a highway, thats where most accidents happen.
I had a nightmare, i dreamt i was you.
- I think they are all pretty mean.

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