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Amelia

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Hey, I've done these before and never know what to say so here it goes...
I'm Amelia. Coopenhagen rocks. Screw Corporate America and McDonalds. I love writing and music. My favorite bands/artists are: Arcade Fire, The Beatles, Beach Boys, The Cure, Cream, Eric Clapton, The Kinks, Led Zepplin, More saduisahduiash dsau

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worlds_away asked:

07 Sep 2009

STORY PART 1 ( the picture is the girl)

" We're home." my uncle, Ben said, dropping a suitcase on the floor. The sound vibrated throughout the small room, bouncing off the walls and the ceiling.

Home. Why did that sound like a horrible lie? I had lived in Carmel for seventeen years, but this wasn't home to me. It was home to Ben and his many books, that whenever I came here, would stay up half the night reading.

I half-expected to see my mom come downstairs, or my dad pop out from the kitchen, but the more I waited, the more the empty pit in my stomach grew. Me, of all people should know the answer to the emptiness. It was a stupid assumption that they would come out, waiting for me. My parents were gone. Forever. I blinked back tears as I shouldered the bag I was holding and made my way upstairs and into my room. It looked the same as I had left it two years ago; The walls were bare, white and plain, and the only thing on the bed was a pillow and multi-colored quilt.

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isthereareas0nf0rmetol0vey0u

isthereareas0nf0rmetol0vey0u says:

Posted on 07 Sep 2009

:thumbup:

isthereareas0nf0rmetol0vey0u

isthereareas0nf0rmetol0vey0u says:

Posted on 07 Sep 2009

the girl is pretty, is that Elizabeth? (inside joke)

ginger_e

ginger_e says:

Posted on 07 Sep 2009

it needs some car chases lol no its good ur half my age and can write better than me

auri

auri says:

Posted on 07 Sep 2009

wow, love it!(:

midsummer_dreams

midsummer_dreams says:

Posted on 07 Sep 2009

really good!

barbipixi

barbipixi says:

Posted on 08 Sep 2009

fictionpress.com

myradiosayslala

myradiosayslala says:

Posted on 08 Sep 2009

awesome ! :)

crazy_izzi

crazy_izzi says:

Posted on 08 Sep 2009

i love it

great job!!!!

WOW

screaming

u rock!!

oxxo

missymm

missymm says:

Posted on 09 Sep 2009

It's great!

worlds_away

worlds_away says:

Posted on 07 Sep 2009

It's Evan Rachel Wood.

isthereareas0nf0rmetol0vey0u

isthereareas0nf0rmetol0vey0u says:

Posted on 08 Sep 2009

lol, i knew she looked familiar!

worlds_away

worlds_away says:

Posted on 08 Sep 2009

Thanks. There might be later, near the end.

worlds_away

worlds_away says:

Posted on 08 Sep 2009

Thanx.

worlds_away

worlds_away says:

Posted on 08 Sep 2009

Thanx you! :)

worlds_away

worlds_away says:

Posted on 08 Sep 2009

I tried that, but got no feedback. Also, people on there can be mean...

worlds_away

worlds_away says:

Posted on 08 Sep 2009

Fanks.

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