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shysparrow13 asked:

09 Jan 2010

Plot synopsis

This is a very brief plot synopsis for my story and it doesn't even get into the actual plot but I need comments/suggestions. :)

At the beginning of the novel, while riding in a car with her mother and younger brother, 17-year-old Willow Claire Evans is in an accident, which kills her mother and brother. Her father, Thomas Evans comes to Ontario, Canada and brings her back to Portland, Maine a month after the accident. Understandably, Willow is still in shock over her mother's death, and is slow to warm to her father and her new life. Willow and her father have not seen or been in touch since Willow had left with her mother and younger brother to live in Ontario when she was three years old.

Thomas Alden is an artist, an inventor, and a naturalist. The complex inventions and works of art and sculpture that lie around his house and property evidence his intelligence.

Upon arrival to the states she begins attending Portland High School in the middle of the semester, in which she meets her future friends, Kaylie Dewing, Zachary Daniels, Heather Mills, James Handleman.

Kaylie is originally from Middlesbrough, England and is moving back for college to study catering become a chef, she's a natural blonde, but her hair color at the moment is mahogany red. She is very intelligent and is the schools newspaper's photographer. She studies English literature, maths, triple sciences, RE, ICT, Catering, National BTec Art and Design Diploma.

Zachary is your average American football quarterback superstar with golden honey blonde hair and hazel eyes. He first notices Kaylie and gives her a tour of the school. He turns out to be self-centered and ignorant. He asks Kaylie out on the second day of school but she nervously declines.

Heather Mills is beautiful with auburn hair and green eyes. She is manipulative, vengeful and desperate for attention.

James Handleman is a friend to Kaylie, but keeps to himself often. He is the one who gives Kaylie the book that helps her figure out Brenden's secret. He is loyal, friendly and the boy-next-door type. Through the novel he develops a small crush on Willow but she politely declines.

Willow Claire "Claire-bear" Evans has sparkling blue eyes and thin straight, rib-length chocolate brown hair. She is naturally very thin and has knobby knees and lankly arms and is 5'3. She has pale, clear skin, a big nose and thin lips. She is intelligent, clever and creative though can be clumsy, naieve and stubborn at times. She shows a passion for writing and keeps a journal, though she barely writes in it. The first entry is the first day she meets Brenden.

On the second day of school, a boy who was not there the previous one, shows up in Willow's English class and has a seizure. He is not present the next day...

© 2010

I don't believe any of you would, but please do not use this idea or any of the characters. Thanks! :3



manssskulll says:

Posted on 09 Jan 2010

I tihnk its good, :) Keep writting x

Why don't you post it on Mibba? x

Its a good websit xx


coraliiee says:

Posted on 09 Jan 2010

I think it sounds really good so far..keep going! :)


crazy_izzi says:

Posted on 09 Jan 2010

its really gud!! keep going!!!



kaylieee says:

Posted on 12 Apr 2010

im kaylie dewing!!

how do you know so much about me where are you getting my information from!!

and if youve got a problem beliving its me just add me on facebook or twitter!

You allready know my full name afterall.

how can you say to people dont use my characters when you havent made them yourself!!

You even know what i study and my hair colour!!

Oh and btw just so you know!

my hairs no more red, its light brown. and Im not going to study catering im studying performing arts!

an answer please? im not mad, just shocked!

id just have liked to know how you know all of this about me


shysparrow13 says:

Posted on 09 Jan 2010

ok i'll sign up!

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