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shysparrow13 asked:

12 Jan 2010

please read!! ^-^ ?

"Wh-who was that girl? I asked shivering from the cold. I wrapped my arms around my waist.

"What girl?" Alistair asked meekly.

"Th-the girl you wer-wer sitting with-ith at lu-lu-lunch?" I shook violently. Alistair wrapped his arm around me and let my head rest dully on his broad shoulder. "When?" he chuckled, tucking my head closer to his chest. "At-at lunch," I spat, looking up at his strong face. His smile vanished into a hard line. He pursed his lips. "What?" I asked apologetically, "D-did I say some-something wrong?" "No," he shot back, "sorry," he recovered. I looked down at my rubber boots. They were muddy and uncomfortable. My socks were already drenched. I flinched as a raindrop slid slowly down my spine.

This is another part, not connected to the last:

I looked around the deserted street.

Not a soul.

Just the rubble under my bare feet and me. And a few parked cars.

I headed into the dense forest. It was just thick, green for as far as I could see.


I sat down slowly next to a big gray rock that had R loves K engraved in the side. Who were R and K? Did K love R? I pushed the thought to the back of my mind as I began to pour my life into the little booklet that I hadn't opened in at least three months. I crept over the notebook, until every inch of four pages was filled with blackish blue pen marks. Though, all I could manage to make out was:

I am alone. I completed my thought.

In a place I really don't want to be, with people I'd rather be dead just go away, leave me alone. I wish I could become a tree in the forest. I'd fit right in with the oaks and the elms, I'd proba



iamdifferent says:

Posted on 12 Jan 2010

The first one is very good. Even if it's just like an excerpt, you can take a lot from it.


barbipixi says:

Posted on 12 Jan 2010

good the only thing is at the first 'wrapped my arms around my waist"

do you mean arms over her chest or hands on her hips?


manssskulll says:

Posted on 12 Jan 2010

its pretty good :) x


gee_jade says:

Posted on 12 Jan 2010

well done. another part of an awesome story........piece them together honey ^_^


crazy_izzi says:

Posted on 12 Jan 2010

like it alot keep it going!


shysparrow13 says:

Posted on 12 Jan 2010

thanx! :)

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