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Hey, I'm Gabriella and I'm 15 years old. :)
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omg_rawr_its_gary asked:

17 Feb 2010

I wanted to know what you guys thought of this peom,

I'm doing a project in Ela on an object, Mine was a cloud so I chose to write a poem using it so if you could tell me how it is and if/what you'd change. :)

Alone stands the eagle,

Among the land that was once known.

Every poor soul laves a trail behind

Then leads up to the skies above.

Up to the clouds-

A journey has begun.

As the vast sky awakens they move on,

Traveling side by side along with one another.

They pour the memories of the one once lived

As their sorrow bursts,

The clouds turn billow gray releasing their sadness on to the plains

But when those once lived become elated again

They release their goodbyes-

Leaving behind what’s left of them-

And creating a new birth,

For which we know as the gift of life.

Replenishing that same land that was once known

Leaving that eagle with more than himself,

Until the day comes for which he shall go up to the clouds above.

And travel among the others at last.

He shall gaze at the clouds above,

Perched in wonderment asking, “Is there more than just this?”

But when that day comes

He will see all the freedom

That was once unknown.



xxmusicluverxx says:

Posted on 18 Feb 2010

I don't know much about poems, so I don't know what you need to change. I say don't change anything!!! I think it's freakin' awesome!!!!!! Your so talented, DON'T stop writing!

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