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midsummer_dreams asked:

07 Oct 2009

I wrote a story! :D (well, the start of it.. i just like writing beginiings then ditch it.) judgee?

I looked up into his venomous eyes and my lips curved into a mysterious smile. I don't know why I was smiling. He was about to kill me, as far as I was concerned. His eyes narrowed.

"What's funny?" he snarled.

I smiled wider. I stared deeper into his eyes, trying to make sense of this beautiful beast. The same eyes that once fooled me, that once hypnotized me, were a fierce colour of red, full of hatred and anger. But deep in his eyes, I could see regret. I could see a tragic past, suffering, pain.

He pressed the knife harder against my neck. There was sweat on his forehead, which was mainly covered by a few strands of his dark brown hair.

"You gonna tell me what's funny?"

"And if I don't?" I challenged him. "Gonna kill me? Wow, I can't imagine what THAT'D be like!" I couldn't believe it. I was seconds away from death and I was giving it more reasons to come and snatch my life from me.



BLAH CBA NO MORE ;) hows it so faar? x

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bethanyjl

bethanyjl says:

Posted on 07 Oct 2009

Very good!:)

fulltimepinklady

fulltimepinklady says:

Posted on 08 Oct 2009

i liked it! it kept my attention the whole time (which is hard to do) I would consider taking your time and making an ending if I were you

kekye

kekye says:

Posted on 08 Oct 2009

I agree with below. :D

hayley___hamm

hayley___hamm says:

Posted on 25 Oct 2009

great job!!!! haa but since u dont like to finish ur amazing stories does that mean ur notgona finish forbidden disire?!! aw i was looking forward to it! DARN!

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