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midsummer_dreams asked:

26 Dec 2009

another story starting, was bored ;D x

it probs aint that good cos i just made this on the spot but, hey, cut me some slack ok? :P im only 11. (well, almost 12, butyeah..)

I looked around at the surroundings. It was a very dull sort of place, with lots of tall, concrete buildings and an unanimated, grey ground. Graffiti was etched on almost every inch of the walls. The ashen black sky fitted in nicely with the lifeless decor. I took a deep breath and looked at my watch. 3:05 am. Somewhere above me, a crow croaked. I shivered. I wondered why he had called me here, and so late aswell. I knew I was a fool for following his instructions. He was dangerous, and I knew it. Then why did I come here? On my own?

I heard heavy footsteps behind me, bringing me out of my thoughts. I spun arounnd so fast, I almost lost my balance and fell. And then I saw him. It was like someone had just punched me in the stomach; all the breath was knocked out of me. I observed him greedily, wanting to take in as much details as my eyes would allow.

His dark hair flopped casually over his forehead, his eyes an impossible shade of green. He was dressed in jeans and a dirty, checked shirt. One of his boots were falling apart, and there was dirt smeared on some parts of his face. But despite all of this- despite the shabbiness- he was beautiful. More beautiful than my heart could take. , He walked warily towards me, as if scared of frighting me away. His lips twisted into a small, winning smile.

"I knew you would come. I knew it." he whispered.

I realised I was holding my breath. I slowly let it out.

"W-why did you call me here?" I whimpered. I could've kicked myself. Couldn't i just control myself around him?!

He just simply started at me, his eyes tracing my face.

"why did you call me?" I repeated, my voice braver.

"Im sorry." His smile had vanished. His face was much more serious; more aged. Fear swam through me.

"W-what do you mean?" I whispered, terrified.

"Im sorry." He repeated. There was now



crazy_izzi says:

Posted on 26 Dec 2009

like it! very much keep it up and hurry up with da writing!! hahaha



xxrandomxxafixxfanxx says:

Posted on 26 Dec 2009

hey its pretty good i like it

maybe anyway u could speed up the finish cause u left me hanging

jk no rush cause a good story cant be rushed



barbipixi says:

Posted on 27 Dec 2009

never underestimate the power of

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