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Hannah

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Hey im Hannah, i am english but live in Greece with my omafos enlinas mou ( my beautiful greek boyfriend)

I am 23and love hair makeup and fashion.

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hanlou asked:

11 Apr 2010

what do you think to my poem?????





When I first heard this I thought this cant be true,

I Listened to you intensely, wanting to be with you,

I watch you every second thinking how can this be,

Someone as perfect as you , wanting to be with me.



I have only met you for five days ,

At first my head said to stay away,

As everything has happened so quickly,

I didn’t think I could cope with it,

As I know of you very little.



I love hearing your stories,

They always make me laugh

And I love the way you want to be close to me,

As I never want to be apart.



I like it when you hold me and look into my eyes,

And when you tell me how much you want me,

I am hoping this is not all lies.



I wish I knew what you where thinking,

Just to stop me being scared,

And I wish I knew what you really want,

And if you will always be there,



last night I could not sleep,

For the fear, just maybe, soon you wont come here.



Today was very hard for me,

As I realized what was happening,

My head was swimming with thought of you ,

And how this could true,



But last night you was very wired,

I don’t know what happened with you,

I hope this is not the end,

As I really want to be near you,



I know you are confused by me,

and what I think for you,

This is because I cant open up,

As this is very hard to do.



I am sorry I always joke,

But this is what I do,

To stop myself being hurt,

By the fear of losing you.



I feel very stupid writing this poem to you

I couldn’t think of a way to tell you how I feel,

And I thought maybe this is best to do.

So now I hope you understand ,

how much I like to spend my time with you.

And how now you are in my heart,

I hope you feel the same way too.

Answers

ballet2797

ballet2797 says:

Posted on 11 Apr 2010

thats amazing:) beautiful

myradiosayslala

myradiosayslala says:

Posted on 12 Apr 2010

wow , great ! :D

amaay

amaay says:

Posted on 12 Apr 2010

i love it! :) xx

evan_english

evan_english says:

Posted on 14 Apr 2010

I can tell you love the word, "you", a lot. Also, remember that poetry doesn't have to rhyme. Experiment with it a bit.

crazy_izzi

crazy_izzi says:

Posted on 15 Apr 2010

love it

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