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gee_jade asked:

11 Aug 2009

my poem! ^_^ what do you think?

okay so i wrote this last year out of boredom in school during class hours. hehe.........okay, here goes.

Hate That I Love You

It's irritating how you make me feel

Why do I feel this way when I know it's wrong?

Her presence makes me wanna kill

I can't control myself and I know it's wrong

I know my limits this craziness must end

But over you still I am crying

It shatters my soul

And inside I'm dying

I try to move on

Forget about you

But as I look for someone new

I realize my heart's still with you

I know my limits this craziness must end

Heaven and earth can never be together

What we are now

Is what we'll be forever

so what do you guys think? my hand has been itching to post it here to get some opinios. ^_^ here's my account anyway:



kamakaziikimber says:

Posted on 11 Aug 2009

Nice, I really like it.

It reminds me of that one Rhianna song though.



_riah_ says:

Posted on 11 Aug 2009

I really like it. I might posta couple of my own works of creative writing too.

:) I enjoyed it, very well written!


iheartmusic123 says:

Posted on 11 Aug 2009

I Like It. =] It Kinda Reminded Me Of The Twilight Saga! Lol But I Like It Its Really Good.


barbipixi says:

Posted on 11 Aug 2009

also you can post on

i think i'm barbara myers on there


loooterrxox3 says:

Posted on 11 Aug 2009

i really like it. nice worrk! maybe try finding a site you can post it on other than this. like a poem site! :)


auri says:

Posted on 11 Aug 2009

that was really good =)

Your an awesome poet!



jessd says:

Posted on 11 Aug 2009

i LOVE it.. I think it is really good. and i understand it haha


justinbieberlove1922 says:

Posted on 11 Aug 2009

woww thats incredible.

youu should publish that (:

its so wonderful.


myradiosayslala says:

Posted on 11 Aug 2009

realllllly good !

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