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gee_jade asked:

11 Aug 2009

my poem! ^_^ what do you think?

okay so i wrote this last year out of boredom in school during class hours. hehe.........okay, here goes.



Hate That I Love You



It's irritating how you make me feel

Why do I feel this way when I know it's wrong?

Her presence makes me wanna kill

I can't control myself and I know it's wrong



I know my limits this craziness must end

But over you still I am crying

It shatters my soul

And inside I'm dying



I try to move on

Forget about you

But as I look for someone new

I realize my heart's still with you



I know my limits this craziness must end

Heaven and earth can never be together

What we are now

Is what we'll be forever



so what do you guys think? my hand has been itching to post it here to get some opinios. ^_^ here's my account anyway: http://www.quizilla.com/my/profile

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kamakaziikimber

kamakaziikimber says:

Posted on 11 Aug 2009

Nice, I really like it.

It reminds me of that one Rhianna song though.

(:

_riah_

_riah_ says:

Posted on 11 Aug 2009

I really like it. I might posta couple of my own works of creative writing too.



:) I enjoyed it, very well written!

iheartmusic123

iheartmusic123 says:

Posted on 11 Aug 2009

I Like It. =] It Kinda Reminded Me Of The Twilight Saga! Lol But I Like It Its Really Good.

barbipixi

barbipixi says:

Posted on 11 Aug 2009

also you can post on postpoems.com



i think i'm barbara myers on there

loooterrxox3

loooterrxox3 says:

Posted on 11 Aug 2009

i really like it. nice worrk! maybe try finding a site you can post it on other than this. like a poem site! :)

auri

auri says:

Posted on 11 Aug 2009

that was really good =)



Your an awesome poet!

x

jessd

jessd says:

Posted on 11 Aug 2009

i LOVE it.. I think it is really good. and i understand it haha

justinbieberlove1922

justinbieberlove1922 says:

Posted on 11 Aug 2009

woww thats incredible.

youu should publish that (:

its so wonderful.

myradiosayslala

myradiosayslala says:

Posted on 11 Aug 2009

realllllly good !

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