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My name is Rebecca, but everyone calls me Bec or Becca. I am a drama finatic, and are starting my school certificate this year. I am pretty smart, but im funny too. There is no way i fit into the category of nerd! I love music, but i cant sing or play, and i want to be a surgeon or an actor when i grow up. When i finish school im going to travel the world, and i have plans to find an amazing husband and to have amazing kids.!

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Published on: 03 Jan 2011 by becca_16

Song Lyrics for a dead friend

I started writing these lyrics when my friend committed suicide a few months ago. Are they any good? PLEASE LET ME KNOW. The bridge is my favourite part.


 


(Verse 1)


I never thought i'd feel this way
I hoped i'd never see this day
but now you're gone as the tears run down my face

They told you lies, said it was just a phase
They told you life would be okay
You cried for help but they don't care what you say

(Chorus)
Life's meant to be easy
It's meant to make you smile
You're not supposed to want to die
It's not meant to make you cry

Yeh life's about the moments
When you lose your breath 
It shouldn't break your heart
Don't let it tear you apart


 


(Verse 2)
You were beautiful
You had gorgeous hair
You shined in the sun
And we were always having fun

But something inside
Must'n have been right
You must have been hurting
Cause you took your own life

(Chorus)


 


(Bridge)
Sometimes life isn't what you dream
And that's when it tests us the most
We don't always say what we mean
And sometimes we feel like a ghost
But when life gets us down in the dump
Death shouldn't be where we turn
Because there'll always be little speed bumps
These are just how we learn

(Chorus)

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kittycat

kittycat says:

Posted on 04 Jan 2011

WOW!!! this honestly brought a tear to my eye, this is a lovely thing that you are doing here and you have wrote a lovely song,honestly i sing alot, i do concerts and everything, and this is a really goo song and i honestly mean it, i would love to hear the tune you have put to it and hear it all together. i am sorry for your loss but she will be so happy looking down on you seeing that some one cares and that she was loved i am sure she will be very proud of you and so will be alot of people. As i said i hope i can hear them together sometime.Tbh, i know this would be pushing it but maybe you could publish it, there will be lots of people out there who would put money to a great cause and me including.You could raise money to help you get it published, and then raise money for a charity to help people like your friend, I am so proud that there are people like you in this world and do us good. Think about what i said and maybe email me sum time. GOOD LUCK!!!! x x x x x x x

haikimberley

haikimberley says:

Posted on 04 Jan 2011

omg this is so sweet, sorry for your lost thats terrible but i bet she's got a lovely smile on her face looking down at you for this, it acc made me cry its so beautiful(:

fathima

fathima says:

Posted on 04 Jan 2011

LOVED IT! she is lucky to get a friend like you.

xxbeauty_from_painxx

xxbeauty_from_painxx says:

Posted on 05 Jan 2011

You are outrageously talented Becca_16. Like these girls have said, that girl is lucky to have a friend like you, and is probably a smiling angel. =] And I agree with everything Kittycat has said, get it out there, do some charity, publish it! =]

danyooz

danyooz says:

Posted on 05 Jan 2011

I am extremely proud of you becks :) :) I truly and sincerely am! :) You are amazingly talented and kind i am sure your friend is thanking you right now and im sure that she's proud of you. :) Good Job! :D :D

becca_16

becca_16 says:

Posted on 04 Jan 2011

Thankyou so much. I really like writing songs, but i suck at putting music to it. I have got a tune to it, whether it's good or not and i will record it (sorry for my terrible voice) and email it to you. Yeh i was thinking of getting it out there and trying to raise some money for it, just not sure of the outlet i'll use yet. Thank you so much. This really means a lot to me. xxx

kittycat

kittycat says:

Posted on 04 Jan 2011

No problem. You should enjoy it, especially when you are this good at writting them. :) x I would LOVE to hear the tune and the whole song together, i bet you have a lovely voice. :) ..... I bet it is good, i would love you to email me it, i can not wait know. :D x You really should i think a lot of people will be interested in it, i def would and so would a lot of my friends. x Are you thinking of singing it?? x I am sure any outlet would love to be involved in such a thing. :D x Not a problem darlin, i would love to help you on this project. :D x Hope it goes well and keep in touch with me. :D x x x x

becca_16

becca_16 says:

Posted on 06 Jan 2011

Haha thankyou! Umm, i'm not really sure yet, i'm going to take things one step at a time. My friend is good at putting lyrics to music, so after i've recorded it, (i'm going to this afternoon on my computer) i'll send her and you a copy and see how things go! Thank you so much hun! xxxxx

becca_16

becca_16 says:

Posted on 04 Jan 2011

Thankyou so much. i hope so too. :)

becca_16

becca_16 says:

Posted on 06 Jan 2011

Thanks fathima, it means a lot x

becca_16

becca_16 says:

Posted on 06 Jan 2011

Thank you so much. I just hope wherever she is, that she is happy! Thanks, i will. x

becca_16

becca_16 says:

Posted on 06 Jan 2011

Aw, thanks Danya! You are too, and i'd like to think she is too. Thanks again sweetie :) x

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