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Shelby Malouf




01 Nov 1993


so, hi...i have always kind of sucked at these kind of things but i will give it a shot.... name is Shelby, i live in utah which also adds to the fact that i the sport. i love music of almost all kind...i dont like rap, bluegrass or country but iMore saduisahduiash dsau

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Published on: 12 Sep 2009 by alildifferent

who i am hates who i've been.

i have noticed that over the course of my life i have not only changed physically and mentally but also i am a totally different person.

all that mattered to me was how i looked.  i wanted to be beautiful.  i wanted to fit in.

i was bleach blonde and rail thin...i starved myself.  i could barely make it up a flight of stairs i was so weak.

i listened to the music that i hated but it was what everyone else loved.

i was living my life in a box watching someone else take over my life.

i was so worried i would be considered a freak.  i wanted to be loved by all.

i became just another girl in the crowd. 

i lived to blend in.  i lived to be what he wanted to have.

he one of the most beautiful boys i had ever seen.

he had wild long shaggy hair.  he wore the nice clothes

he was a trend setter.  he looked different but on the inside he was like everyone else.

he made me want to fit in.

but i was never happy in that chase.

i was striving to be the head cheerleader. 

but the time passed and i started make more mistakes. 

i had messed up ways because my mind was set on that boy. 

finally i got to the point where i forgot why i even liked him. 

what was it i saw. 

but one evening i was with my new friends and then i believed.

i saw him.  the most amazing man alive.

he was beautiful in more than one way

a beautiful mind, personality, and he had me at hello.

he was the reason i wanted to fix my ways.

i was a sinner who fell in love with a saint...

i fixed my ways, he was my redemption.

but then my world came crashing in. 

this saint wanted something different

he knew who his angel was

he wanted her

and why wouldnt he, she was perfect. 

beautiful and a saint

they were together.

he was happy.

then she turned out to be a demon

she broke his heart

but he still had hope.

now this saint has another angel in mind.

the angel of the light.

and me. 

i found myself.

but i am still broken, but like a broken mirror i cannot be fixed without sacrifice

none have tried to fix me, none have been willing to pay the price

and now i live on.

broken heart and all.

i move through the night.

wishing to find redemption

but that is not possible

because of

hells angel.



**the pictures are of me before and after.

***i was diagnosed with anerexia nervousa

****i was 4'11" and weighed 60lbs in 7th grade(age:12) .

*****8th (age: 13) grade i was 5'2" and weighed 68lbs.

******now i am 5'5" and weigh 116lbs.   i had a long and hard recovory.

*this is a very poetic version of my story.

**and with recovery came self discovery.       


i am a sophmore( age: 16)  now, i am myself and very happy with who i am but i have my sad moments.

who doesnt.

dont blend in, be yourself...who cares if you stand out. 


dont be unhealthy just to try and impress people.  being too skinny and being someone else is not beautiful


just be happy.  live for today because tomorrow isnt promised.  and i dont know about you but i want to remember being me and having fun than being someone else and not having fun.



unefille says:

Posted on 13 Sep 2009

This is very moving.


crazy_izzi says:

Posted on 17 Sep 2009

IT REMINDES ME OF MYSELF i wanted to be one of the crowed but now i am myself and i am HAPPY i got friends finally and they accept me for who i am


claire_ says:

Posted on 16 Sep 2009

This made me cry! For sharing your touching story i send you an internet hug. :-s


Anonymous says:

Posted on 15 Sep 2009

this moved me!!!!! i cryed!!!!!!!! you are my hero!!!!!! i always have been myself but the bad thing is, my friends try to be like me! i am a crazy spontanious kid who stands out and thats them as well and it all started with me! i want to tell them how its not right to try and be someone else but it just doensnt work!!! :( :( :(


krista090 says:

Posted on 15 Sep 2009

it made me cry


_riah_ says:

Posted on 14 Sep 2009

I agree. Very moving.


emiliegorgrous says:

Posted on 14 Sep 2009

when people read your story. they are going to be moved and people with the same issues are going to look at you and see how far you have come. its people like you who show the world that being your self isnt a crime its not a bad thing. im glad you have recovered and know that this might be hard to hear but the rest of your life is going to be a stuggle but i cant tell your strong and after every thing you've been through your going to make it through any thing!


crazy_izzi says:

Posted on 13 Sep 2009

this is very sad i hope it gets better and u know who u are

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